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Chapter 5 - Miley...!!!

It was already weekend, and Miley had been excited all these days, and was being extra nice, and trying hard to not get into any pranks, which had become her second nature and even if she tried hard to avoid, she pulled one out. She reminded Lily a lot of James’ and Sirius’ ways in the school.

She was already five and her magic was all showing out and it was so very different and amazing to what they had experienced in their childhood. It left them (Lily and James) thinking hard, as to how Miley at such a tender age perform such magic and how could she control it. Because no child without proper training could even half control the magic they have got inside. Most of the times it went on ok, but sometimes, it gave her those chills.

Miley was not an unusual child. She was normal for any five years old. She was just so normal. But her magic, her magic was indeed unusual, unusual for a child of her age.

She could already apparate. It came to them as a shock for the first time, but yes it was true. It was in the after noon and Lily was sitting in the living room with James and Bathilda, talking. Miley was left with Harry in the upstairs room.They were talking and she just appeared there, on asking she just said – “I had seen you doing it, I took mom’s wand and was walking and I wanted to come to you and it happened” Lily could not sleep that whole night. She had not told it to anyone, but then thought about it to discuss it with Albus, she knew he could guide them. It was not that, it was dangerous but it just dint seem normal and it made her more and more uncomfortable as she saw it. She had scolded her so much, told her to not do that again, and never in front of anyone.

She was just worried, Miley had always been such a bright and active child, but now that she was experiencing Lily decided best to ignore it. She had known how it had been to be so different. Being different gives happiness but at a huge cost.

And now with Harry already being at someone’s lookout. She did not want Miley too, to be a matter of attention to anyone.

She knew it was only Albus, who could guide her the best.

13 Readers:

intresting. waiting to read more about what happends to miley. :)

February 1, 2008 at 4:23 AM  

[:D..too fast man...

February 1, 2008 at 4:28 AM  

great going.....keep writing yaar...just improve your page a little......

February 1, 2008 at 5:27 AM  

gud...keep up da ud work...u will soon get a lot of admirers wid ur written work...!!:D

February 1, 2008 at 7:17 AM  

thank you so vry much

@ harneet
@ sandip

February 1, 2008 at 7:39 AM  

hey gr8 goin nidhi!!
the story is gettin interesting day by day!!
w8ing eagerly for your next post!!

February 1, 2008 at 9:46 AM  

hey nidhi..

In between ur story,there r some instances where something like "ifsupportemptyparas endif" occurs....
It occurs jst before beginning of each new para...try to do something about it.

And wudnt it b better that entire posts r separated by lines rather than the post n its writer?think bout it too...

Btw ur story is going gr8.Plz keep posting !!!

February 1, 2008 at 12:05 PM  

And can u try posting longer chapters?feels weird having to change chapters so soon...Mayb give some more details or smthing...
Plz consider.

February 1, 2008 at 12:07 PM  

Thank you...

@Meera

@ sameer

Well i am lukin forward to sort out that problem...but its just you who has encountered such a thing..i'll have to check it out...

well i tried to change the background settings but them i'll have to close it down for sm time...coz i'll lose the data and wud have to post it all l over again....

February 1, 2008 at 11:24 PM  

who is Miley by the way ?!

I can't rememebr Harry having a sister :|

February 6, 2008 at 7:29 PM  

well, dats d whole story yaar, read on and u'll know...

well its a fanfic so m free to add up my own characters and stuff...

February 13, 2008 at 6:28 AM  

Hey Nidhi
Ur fanfics going great except for the paragrah thing. There really is some odd writing before the starting of a few paraz. N I dunno whether u r doing it on prupose or not but the font n the style in each chapter is different. Sometimes itz very big sometimes very small n most of the times itz coming to the left side n whole of the right side is left empty. plz correct this because otherwise your story is superb. :)

February 25, 2008 at 5:51 AM  

@ KEISHA

thank u so much ..

yeah i have got such complaints before...and have cheked it throughout...the problem lies with the server...not the webpage..

try refreshing ur page...if such problem arises

February 29, 2008 at 5:03 AM  

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